Transcript:
Sommia (V.O.): That girl is no sister of mine.
Sommia (V.O.): She's where she belongs, now: in jail.
Sommia (V.O.): I don't have to remember her.
Sommia (V.O.): She's where she belongs, now: in jail.
Sommia (V.O.): I don't have to remember her.
Excellent use of imagery and dialogue to create contrast- lovely intro so far.
ReplyDeleteThanks! If you don't mind my asking, how did you find out about IQF?
DeleteI tend to flip through the less known comics on topwebcomics. I look forward to seeing what you come out with next.
ReplyDeleteMe too. Got anything of your own, or are you more of a reader than a writer?
DeleteHi, Eleven/Hamaika here. Just so you know, the comments by Anonymous in February 2015 were supposed be posted on the next page. I reshuffled some pages during chapter 2 break, and a few comments got jumbled around.
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